Feedback

By reviewing my blocks and feeback, I have found that though the beginning portion of my work started off strong, by the end of my second block, many mistakes started to be made. These included many grammatical errors and somewhat some confusion regarding what the last section was to get across. Since I have limited access to my computer, I have made these corrections on my printed off hardcopy, but have not made changes to my online document yet. Likewise, my computer issues have prevented me from uploading my introduction onto the gmail account. Though I thought the virus on my hard drive had been fixed, it is still acting up. I took it to the tech building again yesterday, so I hope to have it returned again by tomorrow to upload my documents.